I’m still looking for a tile for this WIP, so all suggestions welcome – and of course you will get a mention in the Acknowledgements when I am a published author!!! The segmentation of these posts doesn’t necessarily represent chapter breaks, btw – that’s all part of the IP bit of WIP…
Fran awoke in a tangle of sheets. Duncan was fast asleep next to her, just as beautiful as she remembered him from last night. She nudged him gently. He opened one eye and his luscious mouth curled up at the corners.
“Mmm”
“Mmm, yourself,” Fran replied. “I gotta get going, places to go, people to see, you know how it is.”
“Yep, me too. Come back here.” He reached out for her, but the thought of arriving for her day’s meetings disheveled, in yesterday’s clothes, prevented her from giving in to their desire for more.
“No, really. I told you I’ve got appointments all day, and I need to get back to my hotel, shower and change.”
“When are you leaving town, did you say?”
“I didn’t, but since you ask, tomorrow afternoon. What are your plans for tonight?”
“The same as last night. That is to say, the first part. Dinner with my client, but as we know anything can happen after that… Where will you be?”
“If I can sign up my new account, I’ll have to spend some of the evening with them, cementing our new relationship.”
I know which new relationship I’d rather be cementing, thought Fran, her world swerving off track at the thought of another night with Duncan. She averted her gaze from his naked torso and busied herself gathering up her various items of clothing, shed so wantonly the night before.
“I’d love to see you again. Last night was really special”. Duncan was still in bed propped on one elbow watching her.
“Call me. Here’s my card.” He pulled a thick, grainy business card with gold embossed lettering from his wallet on the bedside table.
“Let me know if we can hook up later. Otherwise…”
Duncan’s alternative proposal was interrupted by a knock on the door. Fran froze, naked, clutching her rumpled suit. Her shoes dangled from a finger.
“Dunc, are you awake?” A man’s voice.
“Er, yeah, sort of,” Duncan called back.
“Open up, let me in.”
“Hold on, man, just give me a minute.” Duncan, stalling for time, leaped out of bed and signaled frantically to Fran to get into the bathroom. Fran responded to the cloak and dagger turn which events had just taken as she quietly closed the bathroom door. Duncan was right behind her wrapped in the hotel robe. She heard him open the door to his visitor, whose identity he had mouthed to her. His business partner, Bernie.
In the bathroom, Fran began to dress. Her underwear was a complete muddle of last night’s haste, and it took some time to disentangle straps and lace. She pulled on her skirt, smoothing it down as best she could. Fully clothed, she fluffed up her hair and slipped on her shoes. She could hear a discussion between the two men going on outside but decided to make her exit anyway. They were two grown adults and she would not be kept hidden in the bathroom until it suited Duncan to let her out.
“Good morning,” she said, emerging in a state of relative respectability.
She took in the two horrified faces simultaneously. Duncan’s was full of guilty shame and Bernie’s was registering sheer incredulity.
“Duncan! What on earth…”
“Mind your own business,” warned Duncan
“That’s rich, bru. Or have you forgotten, I AM your business.”
“Business is business. This was pure pleasure.” Duncan flashed a look of something that looked like triumph at Fran. Fran was fascinated by the exchange so far, but nothing prepared her for Bernie’s response.
“Pleasure to which, my friend, you are not entitled. Forbidden fruits and all that.” There was not a shred of humour in Bernie’s tone as he faced off against Duncan.
Fran thought that he sounded more like a petulant, jealous lover than a business partner. Whatever the case, it was all beginning to sound too contentious. She began to steel herself for her imminent loss.
“Who is she, anyway?” Bernie demanded to know.
“She is the cat’s mother and she’s leaving, so keep your restraining order to yourself and let your partner have a life. Duncan?” Fran looked at Duncan, the unasked question in her voice. She was willing him to demonstrate some of the enthusiasm to see her again that he had shown a few moments ago. Nothing.
“Fine. See you around, then.” She started to push between the two men but was forced to double back into the room to scoop up her bag and coat. Damn. She lost some of the impact of her parting comment. Bernie took the gap.
“He already has a life.”
“Bernie, leave it alone,” Duncan’s tone was cautionary.
“Duncan, do you still want me to call you later, or not?” Fran asked, back at the door, looking defiantly at Bernie.
She saw Duncan almost check for permission with a look at his partner, and apparently his keeper. Briefly Fran considered her options. Dignity at all times, she figured. She dipped into her bag, pulled out one of her own cards and handed it to Duncan. She left him with a dazzling smile, a toss of her long hair and made her exit.
Another one bites the dust, she thought, with a heavy heart and fading smile as she made her way down the hotel corridor. And this one was a real shame. She had felt a special connection but she would simply let it go and put it down to experience, of which by now she had had plenty in her life. As she stepped into the lift, she heard the raised voices of the two men becoming muffled as the bedroom door closed. Fran was intrigued by what had just happened and not a little unsettled. She left the hotel wondering if she would ever see Duncan again, but vowing to herself that she would not allow him to humiliate her like that again.